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Post bstuart 3048 0152 Pgs 1-12
My first session since Disk 1 Target 4.
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Any comments, suggestions or feedback would be Appreciated. Thanks.

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This post was is being updated at 18:36 (pacific daylight) on 06-05-2014 by LtBluPwr to include the following target Photo from bstuart's gallery.
http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1719 ... 8_0152.jpg

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Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:51 pm
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Post Re: bstuart 3048 0152 Pgs 1-12
Page 3:
Spherical, Flat, Huge, Low and Massive are not displayed analytically in your stage 3 sketch. Every word must be represented every time. If you can not figure out how to sketch that perception, then write it into the sketch where it belongs.

Page 5:
Oblong, Tubular, and Close are not represented in the stage 3 sketch.

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Not sure if Dripping should have been in the sensory column or in the dimensional column. Depends on how you perceived it.

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I would be careful of the word Lilac. It could trigger AOL. Light Blue may have been a better word here.
Pointed, near, far, round and scattered are not in the sketch! Every time Blue!

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Long, Tall, and Open are not written nor sketched in the stage 3 analytical sketch.

Congrats on your first experience with AOL drive, Blue. 'Tornado', and it looked like you had a hard time getting past AOL- Mountain as well.

Make the suggested changes second nature over the next three sessions or so.

Keep at it and Keep posting it!

P.S. It also is a great idea to place a link in your posting to the actual feedback photo. It helps to save some time for the person giving you feedback, so they don't have to go looking for the feedback photo targets.

Don't worry about anything other than perfecting your structure, for everything else will fall into place after you do so.

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Post Re: bstuart 3048 0152 Pgs 1-12
Any comments, suggestions or feedback are always Appreciated. Thanks.
In Disk 1 Target 4 pgs 1-9: viewtopic.php?f=19&t=10519 Feedback
DaingMaing wrote:
…Writing in of the perceptions into the stage 3 sketch is reserved for when one can not figure out how to diagrammatically sketch that perception word in the diagram. i.e. 'Moving' and 'fast';…
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In response LtBluPwr asked:
There are several words on the dimensions list which I, at this point, am not sure how to render each in line form. Such as: Hollow, Outside, Open, and perhaps Thick. Do I understand that such words, as dimensions, are acceptable in the Stage 3 sketches?


Whereupon DiangMaing, in feedback to Bstuart 3048 0152 pg 1-12, viewtopic.php?f=20&t=10524 wrote:

DaingMaing wrote:
Spherical, Flat, Huge, Low and Massive are not displayed analytically in your stage 3 sketch. Every word must be represented every time. ... Oblong, Tubular, and Close … Pointed, near, far, round and scattered are not in the sketch! Every time Blue!


Diang, I am very pleased you could clarify that for me. Your feedback is always appreciated. Working on it and not Image

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