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Post Review Please bStuart's Beginner Target 6584/3408
Thank you for your time and input, it is greatly appreciated!

I noticed that I used at least one descriptor word that is not on the list, "AI-Wishful".
I also had a few descriptor words in my S2 that I did not know how to sketch in line form on the S3 analytic sketch. I wrote the word instead, I don't know if I did this properly?

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Thank You!


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http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1719 ... 4_3408.jpg

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Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:41 am
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Post Re: Review Please bStuart's Beginner Target 6584/3408
Blueant wrote:
I also had a few descriptor words in my S2 that I did not know how to sketch in line form on the S3 analytic sketch. I wrote the word instead, I don't know if I did this properly?


The only way you could do it better is to prompt yourself before you place it and ask yourself where does _____ belong? Then place the descriptor where you feel it belongs. If this is what you are doing already, then nothing else to sweat there. Eventually, you want to figure out how to sketch all of the words in the dimension list, and use it that way. however, the until you do, the crutch will work for now.


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Get those AI's written correctly, Blue. Like so: 'AI-Ticked Off' then drop the pen.

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You can do better with the word "Wavy" in your stage three. Those barely resemble "wavy".

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Hey.. there you go: "AI- Lost"

Your best session to date, Blue. You nailed the target solidly. Your structure is getting much better than it was a few weeks ago.

Now give me two more sessions with a structure like you have displayed here, with the suggested corrections incorporated in, and then I want you to move on to the next Disk.

Good Job Blue. Keep at It and Keep Posting It!

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Thu Jun 12, 2014 3:35 am
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Post Re: Review Please bStuart's Beginner Target 6584/3408
Thank you for the excellent and quick feedback. Greatly appreciated. No , I must admitt when writing the words on the S3 analytical drawing I did not prompt myself and try to feel where they go, I will work on including this in the future.

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